I can use similes and my senses in my writing

9/23/2012

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I could hear a sound, dripping and dropping.

By Callum

The ice cube looked like a pretty pearl

By Georgia

The tree was wet, the water shined like clear crystal.

By Ben

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ben
9/25/2012 03:16:20 am

great work love the similes

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kelsey
9/28/2012 04:37:19 am

Excellent work khate.I love it khate

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kelli
9/28/2012 09:55:59 pm

great work khate love it , my dads filming me right now and hes gonna put it on youtube.

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kelsey
10/13/2012 01:09:18 am

Great work charlie!!!!!(i love it charlie!)

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luke
10/18/2012 06:57:19 am

AWSOME!!!!!

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Libby
2/8/2013 12:32:32 am

I loved Khates work.

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Katie
11/2/2012 12:41:05 am

love it its so cool i cant belive it .

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olivia Georgia's sis
12/3/2012 02:31:52 am

fantastic work

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2/14/2013 12:32:52 am

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kelsey
5/10/2013 06:17:02 am

WOW khate your work is fab I love it


























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